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51Story Time~ - Page 3 Empty Re: Story Time~ Sat Jun 14, 2008 12:42 pm

scribblezo8

scribblezo8
Sherbet Lemon
Sherbet Lemon

One upon a time there was a depressed little angel, that was eight years old.
The angel's name was Ellen and she liked to play with her very dark red hair.
She would always play with it for hours since she had no friends in the sky kingdom.
The reason for her loneliness was her dark, big wings that scared everyone off.
The only one that accepted her was the overlord of the underworld who desired her.
He was also a person with dark, black wings and he was lonely too.
He was amazingly popular and he was known as a great sadist and perverted old man.
But he has a really dark eyes that's enough to suck the heart of those who sees his eyes to the deepest pit of darkness one ever known, yet Ellen consider it as the most beautiful eyes she has ever seen in her own lifetime.
Ellen occasionally visit the overlord and make love towards him since the overlord forces her to do so.
Though she tried to resist, she eventually give up because she cant overcome the overlord's power that consumes both her body and her heart.
However, her visits to the lord's castle did not go unnoticed by the sky kingdom...
One day the other angels confronted her about this and she was banished from the kingdom and sent to earth
The lord heard about it and went to earth to find her..
When he found her her big black winds had been cut and she lay in blood on the ground.
He had looked at her once, and felt anguish that he had never felt before for anyone.
His anguish swiftly decayed into rage, and he swore that the angels would pay for their grand hypocrisy, their sham of purity.
Ellen who later woke up finding the lord beside her, was feeling relieved, but at the same time she can feel his hatred and anger, and she could not say a word even if she wants to.
The overlord not feeling Ellen's presents quikly vanished to plot his revenge on the angels, while Ellen feeling dizzy and confused from her loss of blood begain walking on the Earth and meet a young boy sitting in a tree near by.
The young boy regarded her with eyes of the deepest jade, seeing far more than they should have.
Ellen asked the boy where and who she was. . .it seems that Ellen losted her memories.
The boy didn't know how to respond to Ellen's strange questions. And even if he knew the answer, he could not enlighten her, for he was a mute.
The boy was very interested in Ellen and wanted to help so he started by giving her a name, that name was Scarlet after her beautiful dark red hair and her body that was soaked in blood.
Although he could not speak aloud, somehow, he was understood perfectly, whether because of Ellen's celestial heritage, or the boy's own mysterious past was unknown.
Mean while the Overloard sat in his chamber with such rage and cold heartedness to the angels that hell did begin to freeze, and any fool who was brave enough to enter his chambers was brutally killed.
Hatred and the need for vengence rolled from him in waves of ebony anger, making long-forgotten demons stir.
The demons were summoned to the Overlord, and he sent them to kill the leaders of the Sky Kingdom.
However, the angels were reluctant to die, and fought back, their crystal swords a beautiful sight in all its horror.
Overlord goes into more rage seeing that the angels never give up on fighting that he decided to kill them and the the leaders of sky kingdom himself.
For everyone knows, if you want a job done right, you do it yourself. And the fight did go so very right...
Alas! All the Angels died instantly simply with couple of blows, and all that's left for him is to face the archangels and the leader.
However, the Archangels were not so easily defeated, and the Overlord had to flee to tend to his grievous wounds, leaving one angel alive.
The boy with the deep jade eyes look at Scarlet and took her by the hand to where he lived.
Calling his home a shack was polite, but what it lacked in appearance, it made up for in its sense of home.
Scarlet heavenly wings and ears came out of her body and she showed her true form suddenly.
Power rolled from her in waves. The Overlord, so far away felt the electricity play across his skin, and he knew.
Then the overlord thought she had reincarnated the last archangel sesened it too and planned to kill her in revenge. While the boy, named Tim stared in amazement.
Tim (who found his name somewhat anti-climatic) reached forward to touch Ellen's hair, which gleamed and like fire.
However, she's actually in the middle of reviving herself but at the same time, releasing her true powers, causing all powerful lords, humans or non-humans, to shiver in fear, except for the overlord, and the boy (Tim) who's origin is still unknown.
When Scarlet was finished, the last arch-angel, Remmie decided to reproduce some new angels until the next battle with the overlord and to assassinate Scarlet.
Being the last archangel, it would have been difficult for Remmie to reproduce on his own, and so he descended into the world of the humans.
So he found Ellen and tried to get her to make his kids.
However Ellen, now known as Scarlet, did not share Remmie's sentiments, and the heroic Tim came to her rescue.
Of course Tim was badly defeated and Remmie kidnapped Ellen (Scarlet) and continuously raped her until she produced enough angel eggs for other angels.
Scarlet wept, her heart torn in two from the traumatic event. And as she wept, abandoned and sprawled on the forest floor, the Overlord found her. The Overlord was shocked and mad at the same time to see his beloved to be badly raped. . . he wanted her again but she forgotten him.
So the overlord decided to take her to the castle. Meanwhile Tim decided to be strongest human on earth to take back Scarlet once again.
But the only hardship that the Overlord had to face was not found in Tim. The archangels were amassing (for they became adults in a matter of weeks) and Remmie was plotting his revenge...
Another trouble he had was to make new memories with Scarlet since she had horrible memories with the archangel. Remmie desired Scarlet body more and more to make huge armies of angels.
But the Overlord was not willing to simply give into to Remmie, now that he had once again found his Scarlet. The forces of darkness started to gather to him...
Tim also wanted to wage war to have Scarlet so its was the great battle of the three worlds for a mere woman.
This mere woman, so gentle hearted, was loath to watch them fight over her, and waste life. There was no end to fighting if the human dies they get reincarnated, the angel dies then they can merely be created again by others and there are no end to evil spirits to be upgraded to demons.

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52Story Time~ - Page 3 Empty Re: Story Time~ Sun Jun 15, 2008 6:04 pm

happyvampyre

happyvampyre
Sherbet Lemon
Sherbet Lemon

One upon a time there was a depressed little angel, that was eight years old.
The angel's name was Ellen and she liked to play with her very dark red hair.
She would always play with it for hours since she had no friends in the sky kingdom.
The reason for her loneliness was her dark, big wings that scared everyone off.
The only one that accepted her was the overlord of the underworld who desired her.
He was also a person with dark, black wings and he was lonely too.
He was amazingly popular and he was known as a great sadist and perverted old man.
But he has a really dark eyes that's enough to suck the heart of those who sees his eyes to the deepest pit of darkness one ever known, yet Ellen consider it as the most beautiful eyes she has ever seen in her own lifetime.
Ellen occasionally visit the overlord and make love towards him since the overlord forces her to do so.
Though she tried to resist, she eventually give up because she cant overcome the overlord's power that consumes both her body and her heart.
However, her visits to the lord's castle did not go unnoticed by the sky kingdom...
One day the other angels confronted her about this and she was banished from the kingdom and sent to earth
The lord heard about it and went to earth to find her..
When he found her her big black winds had been cut and she lay in blood on the ground.
He had looked at her once, and felt anguish that he had never felt before for anyone.
His anguish swiftly decayed into rage, and he swore that the angels would pay for their grand hypocrisy, their sham of purity.
Ellen who later woke up finding the lord beside her, was feeling relieved, but at the same time she can feel his hatred and anger, and she could not say a word even if she wants to.
The overlord not feeling Ellen's presents quikly vanished to plot his revenge on the angels, while Ellen feeling dizzy and confused from her loss of blood begain walking on the Earth and meet a young boy sitting in a tree near by.
The young boy regarded her with eyes of the deepest jade, seeing far more than they should have.
Ellen asked the boy where and who she was. . .it seems that Ellen losted her memories.
The boy didn't know how to respond to Ellen's strange questions. And even if he knew the answer, he could not enlighten her, for he was a mute.
The boy was very interested in Ellen and wanted to help so he started by giving her a name, that name was Scarlet after her beautiful dark red hair and her body that was soaked in blood.
Although he could not speak aloud, somehow, he was understood perfectly, whether because of Ellen's celestial heritage, or the boy's own mysterious past was unknown.
Mean while the Overloard sat in his chamber with such rage and cold heartedness to the angels that hell did begin to freeze, and any fool who was brave enough to enter his chambers was brutally killed.
Hatred and the need for vengence rolled from him in waves of ebony anger, making long-forgotten demons stir.
The demons were summoned to the Overlord, and he sent them to kill the leaders of the Sky Kingdom.
However, the angels were reluctant to die, and fought back, their crystal swords a beautiful sight in all its horror.
Overlord goes into more rage seeing that the angels never give up on fighting that he decided to kill them and the the leaders of sky kingdom himself.
For everyone knows, if you want a job done right, you do it yourself. And the fight did go so very right...
Alas! All the Angels died instantly simply with couple of blows, and all that's left for him is to face the archangels and the leader.
However, the Archangels were not so easily defeated, and the Overlord had to flee to tend to his grievous wounds, leaving one angel alive.
The boy with the deep jade eyes look at Scarlet and took her by the hand to where he lived.
Calling his home a shack was polite, but what it lacked in appearance, it made up for in its sense of home.
Scarlet heavenly wings and ears came out of her body and she showed her true form suddenly.
Power rolled from her in waves. The Overlord, so far away felt the electricity play across his skin, and he knew.
Then the overlord thought she had reincarnated the last archangel sesened it too and planned to kill her in revenge. While the boy, named Tim stared in amazement.
Tim (who found his name somewhat anti-climatic) reached forward to touch Ellen's hair, which gleamed and like fire.
However, she's actually in the middle of reviving herself but at the same time, releasing her true powers, causing all powerful lords, humans or non-humans, to shiver in fear, except for the overlord, and the boy (Tim) who's origin is still unknown.
When Scarlet was finished, the last arch-angel, Remmie decided to reproduce some new angels until the next battle with the overlord and to assassinate Scarlet.
Being the last archangel, it would have been difficult for Remmie to reproduce on his own, and so he descended into the world of the humans.
So he found Ellen and tried to get her to make his kids.
However Ellen, now known as Scarlet, did not share Remmie's sentiments, and the heroic Tim came to her rescue.
Of course Tim was badly defeated and Remmie kidnapped Ellen (Scarlet) and continuously raped her until she produced enough angel eggs for other angels.
Scarlet wept, her heart torn in two from the traumatic event. And as she wept, abandoned and sprawled on the forest floor, the Overlord found her. The Overlord was shocked and mad at the same time to see his beloved to be badly raped. . . he wanted her again but she forgotten him.
So the overlord decided to take her to the castle. Meanwhile Tim decided to be strongest human on earth to take back Scarlet once again.
But the only hardship that the Overlord had to face was not found in Tim. The archangels were amassing (for they became adults in a matter of weeks) and Remmie was plotting his revenge...
Another trouble he had was to make new memories with Scarlet since she had horrible memories with the archangel. Remmie desired Scarlet body more and more to make huge armies of angels.
But the Overlord was not willing to simply give into to Remmie, now that he had once again found his Scarlet. The forces of darkness started to gather to him...
Tim also wanted to wage war to have Scarlet so its was the great battle of the three worlds for a mere woman.
This mere woman, so gentle hearted, was loath to watch them fight over her, and waste life. There was no end to fighting if the human dies they get reincarnated, the angel dies then they can merely be created again by others and there are no end to evil spirits to be upgraded to demons.
Ellen, such a gentle soul, knew that this could not end while she walked the earth, and so she ran to a nearby cliff and jumped...

53Story Time~ - Page 3 Empty Re: Story Time~ Sun Jun 15, 2008 8:37 pm

shinjou


Pineapple
Pineapple

One upon a time there was a depressed little angel, that was eight years old.
The angel's name was Ellen and she liked to play with her very dark red hair.
She would always play with it for hours since she had no friends in the sky kingdom.
The reason for her loneliness was her dark, big wings that scared everyone off.
The only one that accepted her was the overlord of the underworld who desired her.
He was also a person with dark, black wings and he was lonely too.
He was amazingly popular and he was known as a great sadist and perverted old man.
But he has a really dark eyes that's enough to suck the heart of those who sees his eyes to the deepest pit of darkness one ever known, yet Ellen consider it as the most beautiful eyes she has ever seen in her own lifetime.
Ellen occasionally visit the overlord and make love towards him since the overlord forces her to do so.
Though she tried to resist, she eventually give up because she cant overcome the overlord's power that consumes both her body and her heart.
However, her visits to the lord's castle did not go unnoticed by the sky kingdom...
One day the other angels confronted her about this and she was banished from the kingdom and sent to earth
The lord heard about it and went to earth to find her..
When he found her her big black winds had been cut and she lay in blood on the ground.
He had looked at her once, and felt anguish that he had never felt before for anyone.
His anguish swiftly decayed into rage, and he swore that the angels would pay for their grand hypocrisy, their sham of purity.
Ellen who later woke up finding the lord beside her, was feeling relieved, but at the same time she can feel his hatred and anger, and she could not say a word even if she wants to.
The overlord not feeling Ellen's presents quikly vanished to plot his revenge on the angels, while Ellen feeling dizzy and confused from her loss of blood begain walking on the Earth and meet a young boy sitting in a tree near by.
The young boy regarded her with eyes of the deepest jade, seeing far more than they should have.
Ellen asked the boy where and who she was. . .it seems that Ellen losted her memories.
The boy didn't know how to respond to Ellen's strange questions. And even if he knew the answer, he could not enlighten her, for he was a mute.
The boy was very interested in Ellen and wanted to help so he started by giving her a name, that name was Scarlet after her beautiful dark red hair and her body that was soaked in blood.
Although he could not speak aloud, somehow, he was understood perfectly, whether because of Ellen's celestial heritage, or the boy's own mysterious past was unknown.
Mean while the Overloard sat in his chamber with such rage and cold heartedness to the angels that hell did begin to freeze, and any fool who was brave enough to enter his chambers was brutally killed.
Hatred and the need for vengence rolled from him in waves of ebony anger, making long-forgotten demons stir.
The demons were summoned to the Overlord, and he sent them to kill the leaders of the Sky Kingdom.
However, the angels were reluctant to die, and fought back, their crystal swords a beautiful sight in all its horror.
Overlord goes into more rage seeing that the angels never give up on fighting that he decided to kill them and the the leaders of sky kingdom himself.
For everyone knows, if you want a job done right, you do it yourself. And the fight did go so very right...
Alas! All the Angels died instantly simply with couple of blows, and all that's left for him is to face the archangels and the leader.
However, the Archangels were not so easily defeated, and the Overlord had to flee to tend to his grievous wounds, leaving one angel alive.
The boy with the deep jade eyes look at Scarlet and took her by the hand to where he lived.
Calling his home a shack was polite, but what it lacked in appearance, it made up for in its sense of home.
Scarlet heavenly wings and ears came out of her body and she showed her true form suddenly.
Power rolled from her in waves. The Overlord, so far away felt the electricity play across his skin, and he knew.
Then the overlord thought she had reincarnated the last archangel sesened it too and planned to kill her in revenge. While the boy, named Tim stared in amazement.
Tim (who found his name somewhat anti-climatic) reached forward to touch Ellen's hair, which gleamed and like fire.
However, she's actually in the middle of reviving herself but at the same time, releasing her true powers, causing all powerful lords, humans or non-humans, to shiver in fear, except for the overlord, and the boy (Tim) who's origin is still unknown.
When Scarlet was finished, the last arch-angel, Remmie decided to reproduce some new angels until the next battle with the overlord and to assassinate Scarlet.
Being the last archangel, it would have been difficult for Remmie to reproduce on his own, and so he descended into the world of the humans.
So he found Ellen and tried to get her to make his kids.
However Ellen, now known as Scarlet, did not share Remmie's sentiments, and the heroic Tim came to her rescue.
Of course Tim was badly defeated and Remmie kidnapped Ellen (Scarlet) and continuously raped her until she produced enough angel eggs for other angels.
Scarlet wept, her heart torn in two from the traumatic event. And as she wept, abandoned and sprawled on the forest floor, the Overlord found her. The Overlord was shocked and mad at the same time to see his beloved to be badly raped. . . he wanted her again but she forgotten him.
So the overlord decided to take her to the castle. Meanwhile Tim decided to be strongest human on earth to take back Scarlet once again.
But the only hardship that the Overlord had to face was not found in Tim. The archangels were amassing (for they became adults in a matter of weeks) and Remmie was plotting his revenge...
Another trouble he had was to make new memories with Scarlet since she had horrible memories with the archangel. Remmie desired Scarlet body more and more to make huge armies of angels.
But the Overlord was not willing to simply give into to Remmie, now that he had once again found his Scarlet. The forces of darkness started to gather to him...
Tim also wanted to wage war to have Scarlet so its was the great battle of the three worlds for a mere woman.
This mere woman, so gentle hearted, was loath to watch them fight over her, and waste life. There was no end to fighting if the human dies they get reincarnated, the angel dies then they can merely be created again by others and there are no end to evil spirits to be upgraded to demons.
Ellen, such a gentle soul, knew that this could not end while she walked the earth, and so she ran to a nearby cliff and jumped...
Thinking that suicide would end her life eternally, she was mistaken when she was saved by her own wings, thus causing more grief for herself to realise that she is truly an angel, not a mortal being like humans.

54Story Time~ - Page 3 Empty Re: Story Time~ Mon Jun 16, 2008 10:29 am

scribblezo8

scribblezo8
Sherbet Lemon
Sherbet Lemon

Subject: Re: Story Time~ Today at 7:37 am
One upon a time there was a depressed little angel, that was eight years old.
The angel's name was Ellen and she liked to play with her very dark red hair.
She would always play with it for hours since she had no friends in the sky kingdom.
The reason for her loneliness was her dark, big wings that scared everyone off.
The only one that accepted her was the overlord of the underworld who desired her.
He was also a person with dark, black wings and he was lonely too.
He was amazingly popular and he was known as a great sadist and perverted old man.
But he has a really dark eyes that's enough to suck the heart of those who sees his eyes to the deepest pit of darkness one ever known, yet Ellen consider it as the most beautiful eyes she has ever seen in her own lifetime.
Ellen occasionally visit the overlord and make love towards him since the overlord forces her to do so.
Though she tried to resist, she eventually give up because she cant overcome the overlord's power that consumes both her body and her heart.
However, her visits to the lord's castle did not go unnoticed by the sky kingdom...
One day the other angels confronted her about this and she was banished from the kingdom and sent to earth
The lord heard about it and went to earth to find her..
When he found her her big black winds had been cut and she lay in blood on the ground.
He had looked at her once, and felt anguish that he had never felt before for anyone.
His anguish swiftly decayed into rage, and he swore that the angels would pay for their grand hypocrisy, their sham of purity.
Ellen who later woke up finding the lord beside her, was feeling relieved, but at the same time she can feel his hatred and anger, and she could not say a word even if she wants to.
The overlord not feeling Ellen's presents quikly vanished to plot his revenge on the angels, while Ellen feeling dizzy and confused from her loss of blood begain walking on the Earth and meet a young boy sitting in a tree near by.
The young boy regarded her with eyes of the deepest jade, seeing far more than they should have.
Ellen asked the boy where and who she was. . .it seems that Ellen losted her memories.
The boy didn't know how to respond to Ellen's strange questions. And even if he knew the answer, he could not enlighten her, for he was a mute.
The boy was very interested in Ellen and wanted to help so he started by giving her a name, that name was Scarlet after her beautiful dark red hair and her body that was soaked in blood.
Although he could not speak aloud, somehow, he was understood perfectly, whether because of Ellen's celestial heritage, or the boy's own mysterious past was unknown.
Mean while the Overloard sat in his chamber with such rage and cold heartedness to the angels that hell did begin to freeze, and any fool who was brave enough to enter his chambers was brutally killed.
Hatred and the need for vengence rolled from him in waves of ebony anger, making long-forgotten demons stir.
The demons were summoned to the Overlord, and he sent them to kill the leaders of the Sky Kingdom.
However, the angels were reluctant to die, and fought back, their crystal swords a beautiful sight in all its horror.
Overlord goes into more rage seeing that the angels never give up on fighting that he decided to kill them and the the leaders of sky kingdom himself.
For everyone knows, if you want a job done right, you do it yourself. And the fight did go so very right...
Alas! All the Angels died instantly simply with couple of blows, and all that's left for him is to face the archangels and the leader.
However, the Archangels were not so easily defeated, and the Overlord had to flee to tend to his grievous wounds, leaving one angel alive.
The boy with the deep jade eyes look at Scarlet and took her by the hand to where he lived.
Calling his home a shack was polite, but what it lacked in appearance, it made up for in its sense of home.
Scarlet heavenly wings and ears came out of her body and she showed her true form suddenly.
Power rolled from her in waves. The Overlord, so far away felt the electricity play across his skin, and he knew.
Then the overlord thought she had reincarnated the last archangel sesened it too and planned to kill her in revenge. While the boy, named Tim stared in amazement.
Tim (who found his name somewhat anti-climatic) reached forward to touch Ellen's hair, which gleamed and like fire.
However, she's actually in the middle of reviving herself but at the same time, releasing her true powers, causing all powerful lords, humans or non-humans, to shiver in fear, except for the overlord, and the boy (Tim) who's origin is still unknown.
When Scarlet was finished, the last arch-angel, Remmie decided to reproduce some new angels until the next battle with the overlord and to assassinate Scarlet.
Being the last archangel, it would have been difficult for Remmie to reproduce on his own, and so he descended into the world of the humans.
So he found Ellen and tried to get her to make his kids.
However Ellen, now known as Scarlet, did not share Remmie's sentiments, and the heroic Tim came to her rescue.
Of course Tim was badly defeated and Remmie kidnapped Ellen (Scarlet) and continuously raped her until she produced enough angel eggs for other angels.
Scarlet wept, her heart torn in two from the traumatic event. And as she wept, abandoned and sprawled on the forest floor, the Overlord found her. The Overlord was shocked and mad at the same time to see his beloved to be badly raped. . . he wanted her again but she forgotten him.
So the overlord decided to take her to the castle. Meanwhile Tim decided to be strongest human on earth to take back Scarlet once again.
But the only hardship that the Overlord had to face was not found in Tim. The archangels were amassing (for they became adults in a matter of weeks) and Remmie was plotting his revenge...
Another trouble he had was to make new memories with Scarlet since she had horrible memories with the archangel. Remmie desired Scarlet body more and more to make huge armies of angels.
But the Overlord was not willing to simply give into to Remmie, now that he had once again found his Scarlet. The forces of darkness started to gather to him...
Tim also wanted to wage war to have Scarlet so its was the great battle of the three worlds for a mere woman.
This mere woman, so gentle hearted, was loath to watch them fight over her, and waste life. There was no end to fighting if the human dies they get reincarnated, the angel dies then they can merely be created again by others and there are no end to evil spirits to be upgraded to demons.
Ellen, such a gentle soul, knew that this could not end while she walked the earth, and so she ran to a nearby cliff and jumped...
Thinking that suicide would end her life eternally, she was mistaken when she was saved by her own wings, thus causing more grief for herself to realise that she is truly an angel, not a mortal being like humans.
She decided to find a sadistic human being that can torture and kill her so she can just die.

http://www.sherbetlemon.heavenforum.com

55Story Time~ - Page 3 Empty Re: Story Time~ Mon Jun 16, 2008 3:13 pm

happyvampyre

happyvampyre
Sherbet Lemon
Sherbet Lemon

One upon a time there was a depressed little angel, that was eight years old.
The angel's name was Ellen and she liked to play with her very dark red hair.
She would always play with it for hours since she had no friends in the sky kingdom.
The reason for her loneliness was her dark, big wings that scared everyone off.
The only one that accepted her was the overlord of the underworld who desired her.
He was also a person with dark, black wings and he was lonely too.
He was amazingly popular and he was known as a great sadist and perverted old man.
But he has a really dark eyes that's enough to suck the heart of those who sees his eyes to the deepest pit of darkness one ever known, yet Ellen consider it as the most beautiful eyes she has ever seen in her own lifetime.
Ellen occasionally visit the overlord and make love towards him since the overlord forces her to do so.
Though she tried to resist, she eventually give up because she cant overcome the overlord's power that consumes both her body and her heart.
However, her visits to the lord's castle did not go unnoticed by the sky kingdom...
One day the other angels confronted her about this and she was banished from the kingdom and sent to earth
The lord heard about it and went to earth to find her..
When he found her her big black winds had been cut and she lay in blood on the ground.
He had looked at her once, and felt anguish that he had never felt before for anyone.
His anguish swiftly decayed into rage, and he swore that the angels would pay for their grand hypocrisy, their sham of purity.
Ellen who later woke up finding the lord beside her, was feeling relieved, but at the same time she can feel his hatred and anger, and she could not say a word even if she wants to.
The overlord not feeling Ellen's presents quikly vanished to plot his revenge on the angels, while Ellen feeling dizzy and confused from her loss of blood begain walking on the Earth and meet a young boy sitting in a tree near by.
The young boy regarded her with eyes of the deepest jade, seeing far more than they should have.
Ellen asked the boy where and who she was. . .it seems that Ellen losted her memories.
The boy didn't know how to respond to Ellen's strange questions. And even if he knew the answer, he could not enlighten her, for he was a mute.
The boy was very interested in Ellen and wanted to help so he started by giving her a name, that name was Scarlet after her beautiful dark red hair and her body that was soaked in blood.
Although he could not speak aloud, somehow, he was understood perfectly, whether because of Ellen's celestial heritage, or the boy's own mysterious past was unknown.
Mean while the Overloard sat in his chamber with such rage and cold heartedness to the angels that hell did begin to freeze, and any fool who was brave enough to enter his chambers was brutally killed.
Hatred and the need for vengence rolled from him in waves of ebony anger, making long-forgotten demons stir.
The demons were summoned to the Overlord, and he sent them to kill the leaders of the Sky Kingdom.
However, the angels were reluctant to die, and fought back, their crystal swords a beautiful sight in all its horror.
Overlord goes into more rage seeing that the angels never give up on fighting that he decided to kill them and the the leaders of sky kingdom himself.
For everyone knows, if you want a job done right, you do it yourself. And the fight did go so very right...
Alas! All the Angels died instantly simply with couple of blows, and all that's left for him is to face the archangels and the leader.
However, the Archangels were not so easily defeated, and the Overlord had to flee to tend to his grievous wounds, leaving one angel alive.
The boy with the deep jade eyes look at Scarlet and took her by the hand to where he lived.
Calling his home a shack was polite, but what it lacked in appearance, it made up for in its sense of home.
Scarlet heavenly wings and ears came out of her body and she showed her true form suddenly.
Power rolled from her in waves. The Overlord, so far away felt the electricity play across his skin, and he knew.
Then the overlord thought she had reincarnated the last archangel sesened it too and planned to kill her in revenge. While the boy, named Tim stared in amazement.
Tim (who found his name somewhat anti-climatic) reached forward to touch Ellen's hair, which gleamed and like fire.
However, she's actually in the middle of reviving herself but at the same time, releasing her true powers, causing all powerful lords, humans or non-humans, to shiver in fear, except for the overlord, and the boy (Tim) who's origin is still unknown.
When Scarlet was finished, the last arch-angel, Remmie decided to reproduce some new angels until the next battle with the overlord and to assassinate Scarlet.
Being the last archangel, it would have been difficult for Remmie to reproduce on his own, and so he descended into the world of the humans.
So he found Ellen and tried to get her to make his kids.
However Ellen, now known as Scarlet, did not share Remmie's sentiments, and the heroic Tim came to her rescue.
Of course Tim was badly defeated and Remmie kidnapped Ellen (Scarlet) and continuously raped her until she produced enough angel eggs for other angels.
Scarlet wept, her heart torn in two from the traumatic event. And as she wept, abandoned and sprawled on the forest floor, the Overlord found her. The Overlord was shocked and mad at the same time to see his beloved to be badly raped. . . he wanted her again but she forgotten him.
So the overlord decided to take her to the castle. Meanwhile Tim decided to be strongest human on earth to take back Scarlet once again.
But the only hardship that the Overlord had to face was not found in Tim. The archangels were amassing (for they became adults in a matter of weeks) and Remmie was plotting his revenge...
Another trouble he had was to make new memories with Scarlet since she had horrible memories with the archangel. Remmie desired Scarlet body more and more to make huge armies of angels.
But the Overlord was not willing to simply give into to Remmie, now that he had once again found his Scarlet. The forces of darkness started to gather to him...
Tim also wanted to wage war to have Scarlet so its was the great battle of the three worlds for a mere woman.
This mere woman, so gentle hearted, was loath to watch them fight over her, and waste life. There was no end to fighting if the human dies they get reincarnated, the angel dies then they can merely be created again by others and there are no end to evil spirits to be upgraded to demons.
Ellen, such a gentle soul, knew that this could not end while she walked the earth, and so she ran to a nearby cliff and jumped...
Thinking that suicide would end her life eternally, she was mistaken when she was saved by her own wings, thus causing more grief for herself to realise that she is truly an angel, not a mortal being like humans.
She decided to find a sadistic human being that can torture and kill her so she can just die.
She had hoped to find salvation in a human, Louis DeSange, but he found his own salvation when faced with an angel, and swore to himself to never harm again.

56Story Time~ - Page 3 Empty Re: Story Time~ Tue Jun 17, 2008 12:07 am

shinjou


Pineapple
Pineapple

One upon a time there was a depressed little angel, that was eight years old.
The angel's name was Ellen and she liked to play with her very dark red hair.
She would always play with it for hours since she had no friends in the sky kingdom.
The reason for her loneliness was her dark, big wings that scared everyone off.
The only one that accepted her was the overlord of the underworld who desired her.
He was also a person with dark, black wings and he was lonely too.
He was amazingly popular and he was known as a great sadist and perverted old man.
But he has a really dark eyes that's enough to suck the heart of those who sees his eyes to the deepest pit of darkness one ever known, yet Ellen consider it as the most beautiful eyes she has ever seen in her own lifetime.
Ellen occasionally visit the overlord and make love towards him since the overlord forces her to do so.
Though she tried to resist, she eventually give up because she cant overcome the overlord's power that consumes both her body and her heart.
However, her visits to the lord's castle did not go unnoticed by the sky kingdom...
One day the other angels confronted her about this and she was banished from the kingdom and sent to earth
The lord heard about it and went to earth to find her..
When he found her her big black winds had been cut and she lay in blood on the ground.
He had looked at her once, and felt anguish that he had never felt before for anyone.
His anguish swiftly decayed into rage, and he swore that the angels would pay for their grand hypocrisy, their sham of purity.
Ellen who later woke up finding the lord beside her, was feeling relieved, but at the same time she can feel his hatred and anger, and she could not say a word even if she wants to.
The overlord not feeling Ellen's presents quikly vanished to plot his revenge on the angels, while Ellen feeling dizzy and confused from her loss of blood begain walking on the Earth and meet a young boy sitting in a tree near by.
The young boy regarded her with eyes of the deepest jade, seeing far more than they should have.
Ellen asked the boy where and who she was. . .it seems that Ellen losted her memories.
The boy didn't know how to respond to Ellen's strange questions. And even if he knew the answer, he could not enlighten her, for he was a mute.
The boy was very interested in Ellen and wanted to help so he started by giving her a name, that name was Scarlet after her beautiful dark red hair and her body that was soaked in blood.
Although he could not speak aloud, somehow, he was understood perfectly, whether because of Ellen's celestial heritage, or the boy's own mysterious past was unknown.
Mean while the Overloard sat in his chamber with such rage and cold heartedness to the angels that hell did begin to freeze, and any fool who was brave enough to enter his chambers was brutally killed.
Hatred and the need for vengence rolled from him in waves of ebony anger, making long-forgotten demons stir.
The demons were summoned to the Overlord, and he sent them to kill the leaders of the Sky Kingdom.
However, the angels were reluctant to die, and fought back, their crystal swords a beautiful sight in all its horror.
Overlord goes into more rage seeing that the angels never give up on fighting that he decided to kill them and the the leaders of sky kingdom himself.
For everyone knows, if you want a job done right, you do it yourself. And the fight did go so very right...
Alas! All the Angels died instantly simply with couple of blows, and all that's left for him is to face the archangels and the leader.
However, the Archangels were not so easily defeated, and the Overlord had to flee to tend to his grievous wounds, leaving one angel alive.
The boy with the deep jade eyes look at Scarlet and took her by the hand to where he lived.
Calling his home a shack was polite, but what it lacked in appearance, it made up for in its sense of home.
Scarlet heavenly wings and ears came out of her body and she showed her true form suddenly.
Power rolled from her in waves. The Overlord, so far away felt the electricity play across his skin, and he knew.
Then the overlord thought she had reincarnated the last archangel sesened it too and planned to kill her in revenge. While the boy, named Tim stared in amazement.
Tim (who found his name somewhat anti-climatic) reached forward to touch Ellen's hair, which gleamed and like fire.
However, she's actually in the middle of reviving herself but at the same time, releasing her true powers, causing all powerful lords, humans or non-humans, to shiver in fear, except for the overlord, and the boy (Tim) who's origin is still unknown.
When Scarlet was finished, the last arch-angel, Remmie decided to reproduce some new angels until the next battle with the overlord and to assassinate Scarlet.
Being the last archangel, it would have been difficult for Remmie to reproduce on his own, and so he descended into the world of the humans.
So he found Ellen and tried to get her to make his kids.
However Ellen, now known as Scarlet, did not share Remmie's sentiments, and the heroic Tim came to her rescue.
Of course Tim was badly defeated and Remmie kidnapped Ellen (Scarlet) and continuously raped her until she produced enough angel eggs for other angels.
Scarlet wept, her heart torn in two from the traumatic event. And as she wept, abandoned and sprawled on the forest floor, the Overlord found her. The Overlord was shocked and mad at the same time to see his beloved to be badly raped. . . he wanted her again but she forgotten him.
So the overlord decided to take her to the castle. Meanwhile Tim decided to be strongest human on earth to take back Scarlet once again.
But the only hardship that the Overlord had to face was not found in Tim. The archangels were amassing (for they became adults in a matter of weeks) and Remmie was plotting his revenge...
Another trouble he had was to make new memories with Scarlet since she had horrible memories with the archangel. Remmie desired Scarlet body more and more to make huge armies of angels.
But the Overlord was not willing to simply give into to Remmie, now that he had once again found his Scarlet. The forces of darkness started to gather to him...
Tim also wanted to wage war to have Scarlet so its was the great battle of the three worlds for a mere woman.
This mere woman, so gentle hearted, was loath to watch them fight over her, and waste life. There was no end to fighting if the human dies they get reincarnated, the angel dies then they can merely be created again by others and there are no end to evil spirits to be upgraded to demons.
Ellen, such a gentle soul, knew that this could not end while she walked the earth, and so she ran to a nearby cliff and jumped...
Thinking that suicide would end her life eternally, she was mistaken when she was saved by her own wings, thus causing more grief for herself to realise that she is truly an angel, not a mortal being like humans.
She decided to find a sadistic human being that can torture and kill her so she can just die.
She had hoped to find salvation in a human, Louis DeSange, but he found his own salvation when faced with an angel, and swore to himself to never harm again.
It turns out Ellen's power of forgiveness (that she unconsciously emitted) is greater than she thought, yet neither the Overlord, Remmie or Tim is willing to back down from the battle, so she sought for even more sadistic human who's willing to torture her to death.

57Story Time~ - Page 3 Empty Re: Story Time~ Tue Jun 17, 2008 9:10 am

happyvampyre

happyvampyre
Sherbet Lemon
Sherbet Lemon

One upon a time there was a depressed little angel, that was eight years old.
The angel's name was Ellen and she liked to play with her very dark red hair.
She would always play with it for hours since she had no friends in the sky kingdom.
The reason for her loneliness was her dark, big wings that scared everyone off.
The only one that accepted her was the overlord of the underworld who desired her.
He was also a person with dark, black wings and he was lonely too.
He was amazingly popular and he was known as a great sadist and perverted old man.
But he has a really dark eyes that's enough to suck the heart of those who sees his eyes to the deepest pit of darkness one ever known, yet Ellen consider it as the most beautiful eyes she has ever seen in her own lifetime.
Ellen occasionally visit the overlord and make love towards him since the overlord forces her to do so.
Though she tried to resist, she eventually give up because she cant overcome the overlord's power that consumes both her body and her heart.
However, her visits to the lord's castle did not go unnoticed by the sky kingdom...
One day the other angels confronted her about this and she was banished from the kingdom and sent to earth
The lord heard about it and went to earth to find her..
When he found her her big black winds had been cut and she lay in blood on the ground.
He had looked at her once, and felt anguish that he had never felt before for anyone.
His anguish swiftly decayed into rage, and he swore that the angels would pay for their grand hypocrisy, their sham of purity.
Ellen who later woke up finding the lord beside her, was feeling relieved, but at the same time she can feel his hatred and anger, and she could not say a word even if she wants to.
The overlord not feeling Ellen's presents quikly vanished to plot his revenge on the angels, while Ellen feeling dizzy and confused from her loss of blood begain walking on the Earth and meet a young boy sitting in a tree near by.
The young boy regarded her with eyes of the deepest jade, seeing far more than they should have.
Ellen asked the boy where and who she was. . .it seems that Ellen losted her memories.
The boy didn't know how to respond to Ellen's strange questions. And even if he knew the answer, he could not enlighten her, for he was a mute.
The boy was very interested in Ellen and wanted to help so he started by giving her a name, that name was Scarlet after her beautiful dark red hair and her body that was soaked in blood.
Although he could not speak aloud, somehow, he was understood perfectly, whether because of Ellen's celestial heritage, or the boy's own mysterious past was unknown.
Mean while the Overloard sat in his chamber with such rage and cold heartedness to the angels that hell did begin to freeze, and any fool who was brave enough to enter his chambers was brutally killed.
Hatred and the need for vengence rolled from him in waves of ebony anger, making long-forgotten demons stir.
The demons were summoned to the Overlord, and he sent them to kill the leaders of the Sky Kingdom.
However, the angels were reluctant to die, and fought back, their crystal swords a beautiful sight in all its horror.
Overlord goes into more rage seeing that the angels never give up on fighting that he decided to kill them and the the leaders of sky kingdom himself.
For everyone knows, if you want a job done right, you do it yourself. And the fight did go so very right...
Alas! All the Angels died instantly simply with couple of blows, and all that's left for him is to face the archangels and the leader.
However, the Archangels were not so easily defeated, and the Overlord had to flee to tend to his grievous wounds, leaving one angel alive.
The boy with the deep jade eyes look at Scarlet and took her by the hand to where he lived.
Calling his home a shack was polite, but what it lacked in appearance, it made up for in its sense of home.
Scarlet heavenly wings and ears came out of her body and she showed her true form suddenly.
Power rolled from her in waves. The Overlord, so far away felt the electricity play across his skin, and he knew.
Then the overlord thought she had reincarnated the last archangel sesened it too and planned to kill her in revenge. While the boy, named Tim stared in amazement.
Tim (who found his name somewhat anti-climatic) reached forward to touch Ellen's hair, which gleamed and like fire.
However, she's actually in the middle of reviving herself but at the same time, releasing her true powers, causing all powerful lords, humans or non-humans, to shiver in fear, except for the overlord, and the boy (Tim) who's origin is still unknown.
When Scarlet was finished, the last arch-angel, Remmie decided to reproduce some new angels until the next battle with the overlord and to assassinate Scarlet.
Being the last archangel, it would have been difficult for Remmie to reproduce on his own, and so he descended into the world of the humans.
So he found Ellen and tried to get her to make his kids.
However Ellen, now known as Scarlet, did not share Remmie's sentiments, and the heroic Tim came to her rescue.
Of course Tim was badly defeated and Remmie kidnapped Ellen (Scarlet) and continuously raped her until she produced enough angel eggs for other angels.
Scarlet wept, her heart torn in two from the traumatic event. And as she wept, abandoned and sprawled on the forest floor, the Overlord found her. The Overlord was shocked and mad at the same time to see his beloved to be badly raped. . . he wanted her again but she forgotten him.
So the overlord decided to take her to the castle. Meanwhile Tim decided to be strongest human on earth to take back Scarlet once again.
But the only hardship that the Overlord had to face was not found in Tim. The archangels were amassing (for they became adults in a matter of weeks) and Remmie was plotting his revenge...
Another trouble he had was to make new memories with Scarlet since she had horrible memories with the archangel. Remmie desired Scarlet body more and more to make huge armies of angels.
But the Overlord was not willing to simply give into to Remmie, now that he had once again found his Scarlet. The forces of darkness started to gather to him...
Tim also wanted to wage war to have Scarlet so its was the great battle of the three worlds for a mere woman.
This mere woman, so gentle hearted, was loath to watch them fight over her, and waste life. There was no end to fighting if the human dies they get reincarnated, the angel dies then they can merely be created again by others and there are no end to evil spirits to be upgraded to demons.
Ellen, such a gentle soul, knew that this could not end while she walked the earth, and so she ran to a nearby cliff and jumped...
Thinking that suicide would end her life eternally, she was mistaken when she was saved by her own wings, thus causing more grief for herself to realise that she is truly an angel, not a mortal being like humans.
She decided to find a sadistic human being that can torture and kill her so she can just die.
She had hoped to find salvation in a human, Louis DeSange, but he found his own salvation when faced with an angel, and swore to himself to never harm again.
It turns out Ellen's power of forgiveness (that she unconsciously emitted) is greater than she thought, yet neither the Overlord, Remmie or Tim is willing to back down from the battle, so she sought for even more sadistic human who's willing to torture her to death.
However, the newly reformed Louis was unwilling to ever let his savior suffer, and so he followed her, not letting anyone touch her.

58Story Time~ - Page 3 Empty Re: Story Time~ Wed Jun 18, 2008 8:17 pm

shinjou


Pineapple
Pineapple

One upon a time there was a depressed little angel, that was eight years old.
The angel's name was Ellen and she liked to play with her very dark red hair.
She would always play with it for hours since she had no friends in the sky kingdom.
The reason for her loneliness was her dark, big wings that scared everyone off.
The only one that accepted her was the overlord of the underworld who desired her.
He was also a person with dark, black wings and he was lonely too.
He was amazingly popular and he was known as a great sadist and perverted old man.
But he has a really dark eyes that's enough to suck the heart of those who sees his eyes to the deepest pit of darkness one ever known, yet Ellen consider it as the most beautiful eyes she has ever seen in her own lifetime.
Ellen occasionally visit the overlord and make love towards him since the overlord forces her to do so.
Though she tried to resist, she eventually give up because she cant overcome the overlord's power that consumes both her body and her heart.
However, her visits to the lord's castle did not go unnoticed by the sky kingdom...
One day the other angels confronted her about this and she was banished from the kingdom and sent to earth
The lord heard about it and went to earth to find her..
When he found her her big black winds had been cut and she lay in blood on the ground.
He had looked at her once, and felt anguish that he had never felt before for anyone.
His anguish swiftly decayed into rage, and he swore that the angels would pay for their grand hypocrisy, their sham of purity.
Ellen who later woke up finding the lord beside her, was feeling relieved, but at the same time she can feel his hatred and anger, and she could not say a word even if she wants to.
The overlord not feeling Ellen's presents quikly vanished to plot his revenge on the angels, while Ellen feeling dizzy and confused from her loss of blood begain walking on the Earth and meet a young boy sitting in a tree near by.
The young boy regarded her with eyes of the deepest jade, seeing far more than they should have.
Ellen asked the boy where and who she was. . .it seems that Ellen losted her memories.
The boy didn't know how to respond to Ellen's strange questions. And even if he knew the answer, he could not enlighten her, for he was a mute.
The boy was very interested in Ellen and wanted to help so he started by giving her a name, that name was Scarlet after her beautiful dark red hair and her body that was soaked in blood.
Although he could not speak aloud, somehow, he was understood perfectly, whether because of Ellen's celestial heritage, or the boy's own mysterious past was unknown.
Mean while the Overloard sat in his chamber with such rage and cold heartedness to the angels that hell did begin to freeze, and any fool who was brave enough to enter his chambers was brutally killed.
Hatred and the need for vengence rolled from him in waves of ebony anger, making long-forgotten demons stir.
The demons were summoned to the Overlord, and he sent them to kill the leaders of the Sky Kingdom.
However, the angels were reluctant to die, and fought back, their crystal swords a beautiful sight in all its horror.
Overlord goes into more rage seeing that the angels never give up on fighting that he decided to kill them and the the leaders of sky kingdom himself.
For everyone knows, if you want a job done right, you do it yourself. And the fight did go so very right...
Alas! All the Angels died instantly simply with couple of blows, and all that's left for him is to face the archangels and the leader.
However, the Archangels were not so easily defeated, and the Overlord had to flee to tend to his grievous wounds, leaving one angel alive.
The boy with the deep jade eyes look at Scarlet and took her by the hand to where he lived.
Calling his home a shack was polite, but what it lacked in appearance, it made up for in its sense of home.
Scarlet heavenly wings and ears came out of her body and she showed her true form suddenly.
Power rolled from her in waves. The Overlord, so far away felt the electricity play across his skin, and he knew.
Then the overlord thought she had reincarnated the last archangel sesened it too and planned to kill her in revenge. While the boy, named Tim stared in amazement.
Tim (who found his name somewhat anti-climatic) reached forward to touch Ellen's hair, which gleamed and like fire.
However, she's actually in the middle of reviving herself but at the same time, releasing her true powers, causing all powerful lords, humans or non-humans, to shiver in fear, except for the overlord, and the boy (Tim) who's origin is still unknown.
When Scarlet was finished, the last arch-angel, Remmie decided to reproduce some new angels until the next battle with the overlord and to assassinate Scarlet.
Being the last archangel, it would have been difficult for Remmie to reproduce on his own, and so he descended into the world of the humans.
So he found Ellen and tried to get her to make his kids.
However Ellen, now known as Scarlet, did not share Remmie's sentiments, and the heroic Tim came to her rescue.
Of course Tim was badly defeated and Remmie kidnapped Ellen (Scarlet) and continuously raped her until she produced enough angel eggs for other angels.
Scarlet wept, her heart torn in two from the traumatic event. And as she wept, abandoned and sprawled on the forest floor, the Overlord found her. The Overlord was shocked and mad at the same time to see his beloved to be badly raped. . . he wanted her again but she forgotten him.
So the overlord decided to take her to the castle. Meanwhile Tim decided to be strongest human on earth to take back Scarlet once again.
But the only hardship that the Overlord had to face was not found in Tim. The archangels were amassing (for they became adults in a matter of weeks) and Remmie was plotting his revenge...
Another trouble he had was to make new memories with Scarlet since she had horrible memories with the archangel. Remmie desired Scarlet body more and more to make huge armies of angels.
But the Overlord was not willing to simply give into to Remmie, now that he had once again found his Scarlet. The forces of darkness started to gather to him...
Tim also wanted to wage war to have Scarlet so its was the great battle of the three worlds for a mere woman.
This mere woman, so gentle hearted, was loath to watch them fight over her, and waste life. There was no end to fighting if the human dies they get reincarnated, the angel dies then they can merely be created again by others and there are no end to evil spirits to be upgraded to demons.
Ellen, such a gentle soul, knew that this could not end while she walked the earth, and so she ran to a nearby cliff and jumped...
Thinking that suicide would end her life eternally, she was mistaken when she was saved by her own wings, thus causing more grief for herself to realise that she is truly an angel, not a mortal being like humans.
She decided to find a sadistic human being that can torture and kill her so she can just die.
She had hoped to find salvation in a human, Louis DeSange, but he found his own salvation when faced with an angel, and swore to himself to never harm again.
It turns out Ellen's power of forgiveness (that she unconsciously emitted) is greater than she thought, yet neither the Overlord, Remmie or Tim is willing to back down from the battle, so she sought for even more sadistic human who's willing to torture her to death.
However, the newly reformed Louis was unwilling to ever let his savior suffer, and so he followed her, not letting anyone touch her.
Ellen, who's now even more depressed, finds herself on an edge because no one can even come near her.

59Story Time~ - Page 3 Empty Re: Story Time~ Thu Jun 19, 2008 6:32 pm

happyvampyre

happyvampyre
Sherbet Lemon
Sherbet Lemon

One upon a time there was a depressed little angel, that was eight years old.
The angel's name was Ellen and she liked to play with her very dark red hair.
She would always play with it for hours since she had no friends in the sky kingdom.
The reason for her loneliness was her dark, big wings that scared everyone off.
The only one that accepted her was the overlord of the underworld who desired her.
He was also a person with dark, black wings and he was lonely too.
He was amazingly popular and he was known as a great sadist and perverted old man.
But he has a really dark eyes that's enough to suck the heart of those who sees his eyes to the deepest pit of darkness one ever known, yet Ellen consider it as the most beautiful eyes she has ever seen in her own lifetime.
Ellen occasionally visit the overlord and make love towards him since the overlord forces her to do so.
Though she tried to resist, she eventually give up because she cant overcome the overlord's power that consumes both her body and her heart.
However, her visits to the lord's castle did not go unnoticed by the sky kingdom...
One day the other angels confronted her about this and she was banished from the kingdom and sent to earth
The lord heard about it and went to earth to find her..
When he found her her big black winds had been cut and she lay in blood on the ground.
He had looked at her once, and felt anguish that he had never felt before for anyone.
His anguish swiftly decayed into rage, and he swore that the angels would pay for their grand hypocrisy, their sham of purity.
Ellen who later woke up finding the lord beside her, was feeling relieved, but at the same time she can feel his hatred and anger, and she could not say a word even if she wants to.
The overlord not feeling Ellen's presents quikly vanished to plot his revenge on the angels, while Ellen feeling dizzy and confused from her loss of blood begain walking on the Earth and meet a young boy sitting in a tree near by.
The young boy regarded her with eyes of the deepest jade, seeing far more than they should have.
Ellen asked the boy where and who she was. . .it seems that Ellen losted her memories.
The boy didn't know how to respond to Ellen's strange questions. And even if he knew the answer, he could not enlighten her, for he was a mute.
The boy was very interested in Ellen and wanted to help so he started by giving her a name, that name was Scarlet after her beautiful dark red hair and her body that was soaked in blood.
Although he could not speak aloud, somehow, he was understood perfectly, whether because of Ellen's celestial heritage, or the boy's own mysterious past was unknown.
Mean while the Overloard sat in his chamber with such rage and cold heartedness to the angels that hell did begin to freeze, and any fool who was brave enough to enter his chambers was brutally killed.
Hatred and the need for vengence rolled from him in waves of ebony anger, making long-forgotten demons stir.
The demons were summoned to the Overlord, and he sent them to kill the leaders of the Sky Kingdom.
However, the angels were reluctant to die, and fought back, their crystal swords a beautiful sight in all its horror.
Overlord goes into more rage seeing that the angels never give up on fighting that he decided to kill them and the the leaders of sky kingdom himself.
For everyone knows, if you want a job done right, you do it yourself. And the fight did go so very right...
Alas! All the Angels died instantly simply with couple of blows, and all that's left for him is to face the archangels and the leader.
However, the Archangels were not so easily defeated, and the Overlord had to flee to tend to his grievous wounds, leaving one angel alive.
The boy with the deep jade eyes look at Scarlet and took her by the hand to where he lived.
Calling his home a shack was polite, but what it lacked in appearance, it made up for in its sense of home.
Scarlet heavenly wings and ears came out of her body and she showed her true form suddenly.
Power rolled from her in waves. The Overlord, so far away felt the electricity play across his skin, and he knew.
Then the overlord thought she had reincarnated the last archangel sesened it too and planned to kill her in revenge. While the boy, named Tim stared in amazement.
Tim (who found his name somewhat anti-climatic) reached forward to touch Ellen's hair, which gleamed and like fire.
However, she's actually in the middle of reviving herself but at the same time, releasing her true powers, causing all powerful lords, humans or non-humans, to shiver in fear, except for the overlord, and the boy (Tim) who's origin is still unknown.
When Scarlet was finished, the last arch-angel, Remmie decided to reproduce some new angels until the next battle with the overlord and to assassinate Scarlet.
Being the last archangel, it would have been difficult for Remmie to reproduce on his own, and so he descended into the world of the humans.
So he found Ellen and tried to get her to make his kids.
However Ellen, now known as Scarlet, did not share Remmie's sentiments, and the heroic Tim came to her rescue.
Of course Tim was badly defeated and Remmie kidnapped Ellen (Scarlet) and continuously raped her until she produced enough angel eggs for other angels.
Scarlet wept, her heart torn in two from the traumatic event. And as she wept, abandoned and sprawled on the forest floor, the Overlord found her. The Overlord was shocked and mad at the same time to see his beloved to be badly raped. . . he wanted her again but she forgotten him.
So the overlord decided to take her to the castle. Meanwhile Tim decided to be strongest human on earth to take back Scarlet once again.
But the only hardship that the Overlord had to face was not found in Tim. The archangels were amassing (for they became adults in a matter of weeks) and Remmie was plotting his revenge...
Another trouble he had was to make new memories with Scarlet since she had horrible memories with the archangel. Remmie desired Scarlet body more and more to make huge armies of angels.
But the Overlord was not willing to simply give into to Remmie, now that he had once again found his Scarlet. The forces of darkness started to gather to him...
Tim also wanted to wage war to have Scarlet so its was the great battle of the three worlds for a mere woman.
This mere woman, so gentle hearted, was loath to watch them fight over her, and waste life. There was no end to fighting if the human dies they get reincarnated, the angel dies then they can merely be created again by others and there are no end to evil spirits to be upgraded to demons.
Ellen, such a gentle soul, knew that this could not end while she walked the earth, and so she ran to a nearby cliff and jumped...
Thinking that suicide would end her life eternally, she was mistaken when she was saved by her own wings, thus causing more grief for herself to realise that she is truly an angel, not a mortal being like humans.
She decided to find a sadistic human being that can torture and kill her so she can just die.
She had hoped to find salvation in a human, Louis DeSange, but he found his own salvation when faced with an angel, and swore to himself to never harm again.
It turns out Ellen's power of forgiveness (that she unconsciously emitted) is greater than she thought, yet neither the Overlord, Remmie or Tim is willing to back down from the battle, so she sought for even more sadistic human who's willing to torture her to death.
However, the newly reformed Louis was unwilling to ever let his savior suffer, and so he followed her, not letting anyone touch her.
Ellen, who's now even more depressed, finds herself on an edge because no one can even come near her.
Louis, who say her grief, tried all in his power to rid Scarlet of it.

60Story Time~ - Page 3 Empty Re: Story Time~ Tue Jun 24, 2008 11:35 pm

twilight9503

twilight9503
Lime
Lime

One upon a time there was a depressed little angel, that was eight years old.
The angel's name was Ellen and she liked to play with her very dark red hair.
She would always play with it for hours since she had no friends in the sky kingdom.
The reason for her loneliness was her dark, big wings that scared everyone off.
The only one that accepted her was the overlord of the underworld who desired her.
He was also a person with dark, black wings and he was lonely too.
He was amazingly popular and he was known as a great sadist and perverted old man.
But he has a really dark eyes that's enough to suck the heart of those who sees his eyes to the deepest pit of darkness one ever known, yet Ellen consider it as the most beautiful eyes she has ever seen in her own lifetime.
Ellen occasionally visit the overlord and make love towards him since the overlord forces her to do so.
Though she tried to resist, she eventually give up because she cant overcome the overlord's power that consumes both her body and her heart.
However, her visits to the lord's castle did not go unnoticed by the sky kingdom...
One day the other angels confronted her about this and she was banished from the kingdom and sent to earth
The lord heard about it and went to earth to find her..
When he found her her big black winds had been cut and she lay in blood on the ground.
He had looked at her once, and felt anguish that he had never felt before for anyone.
His anguish swiftly decayed into rage, and he swore that the angels would pay for their grand hypocrisy, their sham of purity.
Ellen who later woke up finding the lord beside her, was feeling relieved, but at the same time she can feel his hatred and anger, and she could not say a word even if she wants to.
The overlord not feeling Ellen's presents quikly vanished to plot his revenge on the angels, while Ellen feeling dizzy and confused from her loss of blood begain walking on the Earth and meet a young boy sitting in a tree near by.
The young boy regarded her with eyes of the deepest jade, seeing far more than they should have.
Ellen asked the boy where and who she was. . .it seems that Ellen losted her memories.
The boy didn't know how to respond to Ellen's strange questions. And even if he knew the answer, he could not enlighten her, for he was a mute.
The boy was very interested in Ellen and wanted to help so he started by giving her a name, that name was Scarlet after her beautiful dark red hair and her body that was soaked in blood.
Although he could not speak aloud, somehow, he was understood perfectly, whether because of Ellen's celestial heritage, or the boy's own mysterious past was unknown.
Mean while the Overloard sat in his chamber with such rage and cold heartedness to the angels that hell did begin to freeze, and any fool who was brave enough to enter his chambers was brutally killed.
Hatred and the need for vengence rolled from him in waves of ebony anger, making long-forgotten demons stir.
The demons were summoned to the Overlord, and he sent them to kill the leaders of the Sky Kingdom.
However, the angels were reluctant to die, and fought back, their crystal swords a beautiful sight in all its horror.
Overlord goes into more rage seeing that the angels never give up on fighting that he decided to kill them and the the leaders of sky kingdom himself.
For everyone knows, if you want a job done right, you do it yourself. And the fight did go so very right...
Alas! All the Angels died instantly simply with couple of blows, and all that's left for him is to face the archangels and the leader.
However, the Archangels were not so easily defeated, and the Overlord had to flee to tend to his grievous wounds, leaving one angel alive.
The boy with the deep jade eyes look at Scarlet and took her by the hand to where he lived.
Calling his home a shack was polite, but what it lacked in appearance, it made up for in its sense of home.
Scarlet heavenly wings and ears came out of her body and she showed her true form suddenly.
Power rolled from her in waves. The Overlord, so far away felt the electricity play across his skin, and he knew.
Then the overlord thought she had reincarnated the last archangel sesened it too and planned to kill her in revenge. While the boy, named Tim stared in amazement.
Tim (who found his name somewhat anti-climatic) reached forward to touch Ellen's hair, which gleamed and like fire.
However, she's actually in the middle of reviving herself but at the same time, releasing her true powers, causing all powerful lords, humans or non-humans, to shiver in fear, except for the overlord, and the boy (Tim) who's origin is still unknown.
When Scarlet was finished, the last arch-angel, Remmie decided to reproduce some new angels until the next battle with the overlord and to assassinate Scarlet.
Being the last archangel, it would have been difficult for Remmie to reproduce on his own, and so he descended into the world of the humans.
So he found Ellen and tried to get her to make his kids.
However Ellen, now known as Scarlet, did not share Remmie's sentiments, and the heroic Tim came to her rescue.
Of course Tim was badly defeated and Remmie kidnapped Ellen (Scarlet) and continuously raped her until she produced enough angel eggs for other angels.
Scarlet wept, her heart torn in two from the traumatic event. And as she wept, abandoned and sprawled on the forest floor, the Overlord found her. The Overlord was shocked and mad at the same time to see his beloved to be badly raped. . . he wanted her again but she forgotten him.
So the overlord decided to take her to the castle. Meanwhile Tim decided to be strongest human on earth to take back Scarlet once again.
But the only hardship that the Overlord had to face was not found in Tim. The archangels were amassing (for they became adults in a matter of weeks) and Remmie was plotting his revenge...
Another trouble he had was to make new memories with Scarlet since she had horrible memories with the archangel. Remmie desired Scarlet body more and more to make huge armies of angels.
But the Overlord was not willing to simply give into to Remmie, now that he had once again found his Scarlet. The forces of darkness started to gather to him...
Tim also wanted to wage war to have Scarlet so its was the great battle of the three worlds for a mere woman.
This mere woman, so gentle hearted, was loath to watch them fight over her, and waste life. There was no end to fighting if the human dies they get reincarnated, the angel dies then they can merely be created again by others and there are no end to evil spirits to be upgraded to demons.
Ellen, such a gentle soul, knew that this could not end while she walked the earth, and so she ran to a nearby cliff and jumped...
Thinking that suicide would end her life eternally, she was mistaken when she was saved by her own wings, thus causing more grief for herself to realise that she is truly an angel, not a mortal being like humans.
She decided to find a sadistic human being that can torture and kill her so she can just die.
She had hoped to find salvation in a human, Louis DeSange, but he found his own salvation when faced with an angel, and swore to himself to never harm again.
It turns out Ellen's power of forgiveness (that she unconsciously emitted) is greater than she thought, yet neither the Overlord, Remmie or Tim is willing to back down from the battle, so she sought for even more sadistic human who's willing to torture her to death.
However, the newly reformed Louis was unwilling to ever let his savior suffer, and so he followed her, not letting anyone touch her.
Ellen, who's now even more depressed, finds herself on an edge because no one can even come near her.
Louis, who say her grief, tried all in his power to rid Scarlet of it.
While all the confusion, Louis felt a new sentiment toward Scarlet forming inside him.

61Story Time~ - Page 3 Empty Re: Story Time~ Wed Jun 25, 2008 3:12 pm

happyvampyre

happyvampyre
Sherbet Lemon
Sherbet Lemon

One upon a time there was a depressed little angel, that was eight years old.
The angel's name was Ellen and she liked to play with her very dark red hair.
She would always play with it for hours since she had no friends in the sky kingdom.
The reason for her loneliness was her dark, big wings that scared everyone off.
The only one that accepted her was the overlord of the underworld who desired her.
He was also a person with dark, black wings and he was lonely too.
He was amazingly popular and he was known as a great sadist and perverted old man.
But he has a really dark eyes that's enough to suck the heart of those who sees his eyes to the deepest pit of darkness one ever known, yet Ellen consider it as the most beautiful eyes she has ever seen in her own lifetime.
Ellen occasionally visit the overlord and make love towards him since the overlord forces her to do so.
Though she tried to resist, she eventually give up because she cant overcome the overlord's power that consumes both her body and her heart.
However, her visits to the lord's castle did not go unnoticed by the sky kingdom...
One day the other angels confronted her about this and she was banished from the kingdom and sent to earth
The lord heard about it and went to earth to find her..
When he found her her big black winds had been cut and she lay in blood on the ground.
He had looked at her once, and felt anguish that he had never felt before for anyone.
His anguish swiftly decayed into rage, and he swore that the angels would pay for their grand hypocrisy, their sham of purity.
Ellen who later woke up finding the lord beside her, was feeling relieved, but at the same time she can feel his hatred and anger, and she could not say a word even if she wants to.
The overlord not feeling Ellen's presents quikly vanished to plot his revenge on the angels, while Ellen feeling dizzy and confused from her loss of blood begain walking on the Earth and meet a young boy sitting in a tree near by.
The young boy regarded her with eyes of the deepest jade, seeing far more than they should have.
Ellen asked the boy where and who she was. . .it seems that Ellen losted her memories.
The boy didn't know how to respond to Ellen's strange questions. And even if he knew the answer, he could not enlighten her, for he was a mute.
The boy was very interested in Ellen and wanted to help so he started by giving her a name, that name was Scarlet after her beautiful dark red hair and her body that was soaked in blood.
Although he could not speak aloud, somehow, he was understood perfectly, whether because of Ellen's celestial heritage, or the boy's own mysterious past was unknown.
Mean while the Overloard sat in his chamber with such rage and cold heartedness to the angels that hell did begin to freeze, and any fool who was brave enough to enter his chambers was brutally killed.
Hatred and the need for vengence rolled from him in waves of ebony anger, making long-forgotten demons stir.
The demons were summoned to the Overlord, and he sent them to kill the leaders of the Sky Kingdom.
However, the angels were reluctant to die, and fought back, their crystal swords a beautiful sight in all its horror.
Overlord goes into more rage seeing that the angels never give up on fighting that he decided to kill them and the the leaders of sky kingdom himself.
For everyone knows, if you want a job done right, you do it yourself. And the fight did go so very right...
Alas! All the Angels died instantly simply with couple of blows, and all that's left for him is to face the archangels and the leader.
However, the Archangels were not so easily defeated, and the Overlord had to flee to tend to his grievous wounds, leaving one angel alive.
The boy with the deep jade eyes look at Scarlet and took her by the hand to where he lived.
Calling his home a shack was polite, but what it lacked in appearance, it made up for in its sense of home.
Scarlet heavenly wings and ears came out of her body and she showed her true form suddenly.
Power rolled from her in waves. The Overlord, so far away felt the electricity play across his skin, and he knew.
Then the overlord thought she had reincarnated the last archangel sesened it too and planned to kill her in revenge. While the boy, named Tim stared in amazement.
Tim (who found his name somewhat anti-climatic) reached forward to touch Ellen's hair, which gleamed and like fire.
However, she's actually in the middle of reviving herself but at the same time, releasing her true powers, causing all powerful lords, humans or non-humans, to shiver in fear, except for the overlord, and the boy (Tim) who's origin is still unknown.
When Scarlet was finished, the last arch-angel, Remmie decided to reproduce some new angels until the next battle with the overlord and to assassinate Scarlet.
Being the last archangel, it would have been difficult for Remmie to reproduce on his own, and so he descended into the world of the humans.
So he found Ellen and tried to get her to make his kids.
However Ellen, now known as Scarlet, did not share Remmie's sentiments, and the heroic Tim came to her rescue.
Of course Tim was badly defeated and Remmie kidnapped Ellen (Scarlet) and continuously raped her until she produced enough angel eggs for other angels.
Scarlet wept, her heart torn in two from the traumatic event. And as she wept, abandoned and sprawled on the forest floor, the Overlord found her. The Overlord was shocked and mad at the same time to see his beloved to be badly raped. . . he wanted her again but she forgotten him.
So the overlord decided to take her to the castle. Meanwhile Tim decided to be strongest human on earth to take back Scarlet once again.
But the only hardship that the Overlord had to face was not found in Tim. The archangels were amassing (for they became adults in a matter of weeks) and Remmie was plotting his revenge...
Another trouble he had was to make new memories with Scarlet since she had horrible memories with the archangel. Remmie desired Scarlet body more and more to make huge armies of angels.
But the Overlord was not willing to simply give into to Remmie, now that he had once again found his Scarlet. The forces of darkness started to gather to him...
Tim also wanted to wage war to have Scarlet so its was the great battle of the three worlds for a mere woman.
This mere woman, so gentle hearted, was loath to watch them fight over her, and waste life. There was no end to fighting if the human dies they get reincarnated, the angel dies then they can merely be created again by others and there are no end to evil spirits to be upgraded to demons.
Ellen, such a gentle soul, knew that this could not end while she walked the earth, and so she ran to a nearby cliff and jumped...
Thinking that suicide would end her life eternally, she was mistaken when she was saved by her own wings, thus causing more grief for herself to realise that she is truly an angel, not a mortal being like humans.
She decided to find a sadistic human being that can torture and kill her so she can just die.
She had hoped to find salvation in a human, Louis DeSange, but he found his own salvation when faced with an angel, and swore to himself to never harm again.
It turns out Ellen's power of forgiveness (that she unconsciously emitted) is greater than she thought, yet neither the Overlord, Remmie or Tim is willing to back down from the battle, so she sought for even more sadistic human who's willing to torture her to death.
However, the newly reformed Louis was unwilling to ever let his savior suffer, and so he followed her, not letting anyone touch her.
Ellen, who's now even more depressed, finds herself on an edge because no one can even come near her.
Louis, who say her grief, tried all in his power to rid Scarlet of it.
While all the confusion, Louis felt a new sentiment toward Scarlet forming inside him.
This concept was strange to him, an ache omewhere between his ribs, that made him selfless for the first time.

62Story Time~ - Page 3 Empty Re: Story Time~ Mon Jun 30, 2008 10:15 pm

shinjou


Pineapple
Pineapple

One upon a time there was a depressed little angel, that was eight years old.
The angel's name was Ellen and she liked to play with her very dark red hair.
She would always play with it for hours since she had no friends in the sky kingdom.
The reason for her loneliness was her dark, big wings that scared everyone off.
The only one that accepted her was the overlord of the underworld who desired her.
He was also a person with dark, black wings and he was lonely too.
He was amazingly popular and he was known as a great sadist and perverted old man.
But he has a really dark eyes that's enough to suck the heart of those who sees his eyes to the deepest pit of darkness one ever known, yet Ellen consider it as the most beautiful eyes she has ever seen in her own lifetime.
Ellen occasionally visit the overlord and make love towards him since the overlord forces her to do so.
Though she tried to resist, she eventually give up because she cant overcome the overlord's power that consumes both her body and her heart.
However, her visits to the lord's castle did not go unnoticed by the sky kingdom...
One day the other angels confronted her about this and she was banished from the kingdom and sent to earth
The lord heard about it and went to earth to find her..
When he found her her big black winds had been cut and she lay in blood on the ground.
He had looked at her once, and felt anguish that he had never felt before for anyone.
His anguish swiftly decayed into rage, and he swore that the angels would pay for their grand hypocrisy, their sham of purity.
Ellen who later woke up finding the lord beside her, was feeling relieved, but at the same time she can feel his hatred and anger, and she could not say a word even if she wants to.
The overlord not feeling Ellen's presents quikly vanished to plot his revenge on the angels, while Ellen feeling dizzy and confused from her loss of blood begain walking on the Earth and meet a young boy sitting in a tree near by.
The young boy regarded her with eyes of the deepest jade, seeing far more than they should have.
Ellen asked the boy where and who she was. . .it seems that Ellen losted her memories.
The boy didn't know how to respond to Ellen's strange questions. And even if he knew the answer, he could not enlighten her, for he was a mute.
The boy was very interested in Ellen and wanted to help so he started by giving her a name, that name was Scarlet after her beautiful dark red hair and her body that was soaked in blood.
Although he could not speak aloud, somehow, he was understood perfectly, whether because of Ellen's celestial heritage, or the boy's own mysterious past was unknown.
Mean while the Overloard sat in his chamber with such rage and cold heartedness to the angels that hell did begin to freeze, and any fool who was brave enough to enter his chambers was brutally killed.
Hatred and the need for vengence rolled from him in waves of ebony anger, making long-forgotten demons stir.
The demons were summoned to the Overlord, and he sent them to kill the leaders of the Sky Kingdom.
However, the angels were reluctant to die, and fought back, their crystal swords a beautiful sight in all its horror.
Overlord goes into more rage seeing that the angels never give up on fighting that he decided to kill them and the the leaders of sky kingdom himself.
For everyone knows, if you want a job done right, you do it yourself. And the fight did go so very right...
Alas! All the Angels died instantly simply with couple of blows, and all that's left for him is to face the archangels and the leader.
However, the Archangels were not so easily defeated, and the Overlord had to flee to tend to his grievous wounds, leaving one angel alive.
The boy with the deep jade eyes look at Scarlet and took her by the hand to where he lived.
Calling his home a shack was polite, but what it lacked in appearance, it made up for in its sense of home.
Scarlet heavenly wings and ears came out of her body and she showed her true form suddenly.
Power rolled from her in waves. The Overlord, so far away felt the electricity play across his skin, and he knew.
Then the overlord thought she had reincarnated the last archangel sesened it too and planned to kill her in revenge. While the boy, named Tim stared in amazement.
Tim (who found his name somewhat anti-climatic) reached forward to touch Ellen's hair, which gleamed and like fire.
However, she's actually in the middle of reviving herself but at the same time, releasing her true powers, causing all powerful lords, humans or non-humans, to shiver in fear, except for the overlord, and the boy (Tim) who's origin is still unknown.
When Scarlet was finished, the last arch-angel, Remmie decided to reproduce some new angels until the next battle with the overlord and to assassinate Scarlet.
Being the last archangel, it would have been difficult for Remmie to reproduce on his own, and so he descended into the world of the humans.
So he found Ellen and tried to get her to make his kids.
However Ellen, now known as Scarlet, did not share Remmie's sentiments, and the heroic Tim came to her rescue.
Of course Tim was badly defeated and Remmie kidnapped Ellen (Scarlet) and continuously raped her until she produced enough angel eggs for other angels.
Scarlet wept, her heart torn in two from the traumatic event. And as she wept, abandoned and sprawled on the forest floor, the Overlord found her. The Overlord was shocked and mad at the same time to see his beloved to be badly raped. . . he wanted her again but she forgotten him.
So the overlord decided to take her to the castle. Meanwhile Tim decided to be strongest human on earth to take back Scarlet once again.
But the only hardship that the Overlord had to face was not found in Tim. The archangels were amassing (for they became adults in a matter of weeks) and Remmie was plotting his revenge...
Another trouble he had was to make new memories with Scarlet since she had horrible memories with the archangel. Remmie desired Scarlet body more and more to make huge armies of angels.
But the Overlord was not willing to simply give into to Remmie, now that he had once again found his Scarlet. The forces of darkness started to gather to him...
Tim also wanted to wage war to have Scarlet so its was the great battle of the three worlds for a mere woman.
This mere woman, so gentle hearted, was loath to watch them fight over her, and waste life. There was no end to fighting if the human dies they get reincarnated, the angel dies then they can merely be created again by others and there are no end to evil spirits to be upgraded to demons.
Ellen, such a gentle soul, knew that this could not end while she walked the earth, and so she ran to a nearby cliff and jumped...
Thinking that suicide would end her life eternally, she was mistaken when she was saved by her own wings, thus causing more grief for herself to realise that she is truly an angel, not a mortal being like humans.
She decided to find a sadistic human being that can torture and kill her so she can just die.
She had hoped to find salvation in a human, Louis DeSange, but he found his own salvation when faced with an angel, and swore to himself to never harm again.
It turns out Ellen's power of forgiveness (that she unconsciously emitted) is greater than she thought, yet neither the Overlord, Remmie or Tim is willing to back down from the battle, so she sought for even more sadistic human who's willing to torture her to death.
However, the newly reformed Louis was unwilling to ever let his savior suffer, and so he followed her, not letting anyone touch her.
Ellen, who's now even more depressed, finds herself on an edge because no one can even come near her.
Louis, who say her grief, tried all in his power to rid Ellen of it.
While all the confusion, Louis felt a new sentiment toward Scarlet forming inside him.
This concept was strange to him, an ache somewhere between his ribs, that made him selfless for the first time.
He asks Ellen why does he feel pain, and Ellen knew then, that he felt love towards her, and decided to run away from him somehow, fearing that he too would change for worse like the other three men before him, causing more grief not only for her but all the people in the world.

63Story Time~ - Page 3 Empty Re: Story Time~ Wed Jul 02, 2008 2:19 pm

KiKi_burgers

KiKi_burgers
Strawberry
Strawberry

One upon a time there was a depressed little angel, that was eight years old.
The angel's name was Ellen and she liked to play with her very dark red hair.
She would always play with it for hours since she had no friends in the sky kingdom.
The reason for her loneliness was her dark, big wings that scared everyone off.
The only one that accepted her was the overlord of the underworld who desired her.
He was also a person with dark, black wings and he was lonely too.
He was amazingly popular and he was known as a great sadist and perverted old man.
But he has a really dark eyes that's enough to suck the heart of those who sees his eyes to the deepest pit of darkness one ever known, yet Ellen consider it as the most beautiful eyes she has ever seen in her own lifetime.
Ellen occasionally visit the overlord and make love towards him since the overlord forces her to do so.
Though she tried to resist, she eventually give up because she cant overcome the overlord's power that consumes both her body and her heart.
However, her visits to the lord's castle did not go unnoticed by the sky kingdom...
One day the other angels confronted her about this and she was banished from the kingdom and sent to earth
The lord heard about it and went to earth to find her..
When he found her her big black winds had been cut and she lay in blood on the ground.
He had looked at her once, and felt anguish that he had never felt before for anyone.
His anguish swiftly decayed into rage, and he swore that the angels would pay for their grand hypocrisy, their sham of purity.
Ellen who later woke up finding the lord beside her, was feeling relieved, but at the same time she can feel his hatred and anger, and she could not say a word even if she wants to.
The overlord not feeling Ellen's presents quikly vanished to plot his revenge on the angels, while Ellen feeling dizzy and confused from her loss of blood begain walking on the Earth and meet a young boy sitting in a tree near by.
The young boy regarded her with eyes of the deepest jade, seeing far more than they should have.
Ellen asked the boy where and who she was. . .it seems that Ellen losted her memories.
The boy didn't know how to respond to Ellen's strange questions. And even if he knew the answer, he could not enlighten her, for he was a mute.
The boy was very interested in Ellen and wanted to help so he started by giving her a name, that name was Scarlet after her beautiful dark red hair and her body that was soaked in blood.
Although he could not speak aloud, somehow, he was understood perfectly, whether because of Ellen's celestial heritage, or the boy's own mysterious past was unknown.
Mean while the Overloard sat in his chamber with such rage and cold heartedness to the angels that hell did begin to freeze, and any fool who was brave enough to enter his chambers was brutally killed.
Hatred and the need for vengence rolled from him in waves of ebony anger, making long-forgotten demons stir.
The demons were summoned to the Overlord, and he sent them to kill the leaders of the Sky Kingdom.
However, the angels were reluctant to die, and fought back, their crystal swords a beautiful sight in all its horror.
Overlord goes into more rage seeing that the angels never give up on fighting that he decided to kill them and the the leaders of sky kingdom himself.
For everyone knows, if you want a job done right, you do it yourself. And the fight did go so very right...
Alas! All the Angels died instantly simply with couple of blows, and all that's left for him is to face the archangels and the leader.
However, the Archangels were not so easily defeated, and the Overlord had to flee to tend to his grievous wounds, leaving one angel alive.
The boy with the deep jade eyes look at Scarlet and took her by the hand to where he lived.
Calling his home a shack was polite, but what it lacked in appearance, it made up for in its sense of home.
Scarlet heavenly wings and ears came out of her body and she showed her true form suddenly.
Power rolled from her in waves. The Overlord, so far away felt the electricity play across his skin, and he knew.
Then the overlord thought she had reincarnated the last archangel sesened it too and planned to kill her in revenge. While the boy, named Tim stared in amazement.
Tim (who found his name somewhat anti-climatic) reached forward to touch Ellen's hair, which gleamed and like fire.
However, she's actually in the middle of reviving herself but at the same time, releasing her true powers, causing all powerful lords, humans or non-humans, to shiver in fear, except for the overlord, and the boy (Tim) who's origin is still unknown.
When Scarlet was finished, the last arch-angel, Remmie decided to reproduce some new angels until the next battle with the overlord and to assassinate Scarlet.
Being the last archangel, it would have been difficult for Remmie to reproduce on his own, and so he descended into the world of the humans.
So he found Ellen and tried to get her to make his kids.
However Ellen, now known as Scarlet, did not share Remmie's sentiments, and the heroic Tim came to her rescue.
Of course Tim was badly defeated and Remmie kidnapped Ellen (Scarlet) and continuously raped her until she produced enough angel eggs for other angels.
Scarlet wept, her heart torn in two from the traumatic event. And as she wept, abandoned and sprawled on the forest floor, the Overlord found her. The Overlord was shocked and mad at the same time to see his beloved to be badly raped. . . he wanted her again but she forgotten him.
So the overlord decided to take her to the castle. Meanwhile Tim decided to be strongest human on earth to take back Scarlet once again.
But the only hardship that the Overlord had to face was not found in Tim. The archangels were amassing (for they became adults in a matter of weeks) and Remmie was plotting his revenge...
Another trouble he had was to make new memories with Scarlet since she had horrible memories with the archangel. Remmie desired Scarlet body more and more to make huge armies of angels.
But the Overlord was not willing to simply give into to Remmie, now that he had once again found his Scarlet. The forces of darkness started to gather to him...
Tim also wanted to wage war to have Scarlet so its was the great battle of the three worlds for a mere woman.
This mere woman, so gentle hearted, was loath to watch them fight over her, and waste life. There was no end to fighting if the human dies they get reincarnated, the angel dies then they can merely be created again by others and there are no end to evil spirits to be upgraded to demons.
Ellen, such a gentle soul, knew that this could not end while she walked the earth, and so she ran to a nearby cliff and jumped...
Thinking that suicide would end her life eternally, she was mistaken when she was saved by her own wings, thus causing more grief for herself to realise that she is truly an angel, not a mortal being like humans.
She decided to find a sadistic human being that can torture and kill her so she can just die.
She had hoped to find salvation in a human, Louis DeSange, but he found his own salvation when faced with an angel, and swore to himself to never harm again.
It turns out Ellen's power of forgiveness (that she unconsciously emitted) is greater than she thought, yet neither the Overlord, Remmie or Tim is willing to back down from the battle, so she sought for even more sadistic human who's willing to torture her to death.
However, the newly reformed Louis was unwilling to ever let his savior suffer, and so he followed her, not letting anyone touch her.
Ellen, who's now even more depressed, finds herself on an edge because no one can even come near her.
Louis, who say her grief, tried all in his power to rid Ellen of it.
While all the confusion, Louis felt a new sentiment toward Scarlet forming inside him.
This concept was strange to him, an ache somewhere between his ribs, that made him selfless for the first time.
He asks Ellen why does he feel pain, and Ellen knew then, that he felt love towards her, and decided to run away from him somehow, fearing that he too would change for worse like the other three men before him, causing more grief not only for her but all the people in the world.
It became increasingly ovious that this 8 year old girl well everyone forgot that she was 8. honestly how old r the men who like her? sorry but i had to say it i mean the first line in the story says shes 8 yet she keeps geting raped every one writing this story (including me so dont feel to bad) is now a petifial honestly its a great story but i felt the need to rant about this. oh and feel free to leave this out of the next post THANK YOU! and dont kill me

64Story Time~ - Page 3 Empty Re: Story Time~ Thu Jul 03, 2008 1:45 am

WingedAng3l

WingedAng3l
Lime
Lime

KiKi_burgers wrote:One upon a time there was a depressed little angel, that was eight years old.
The angel's name was Ellen and she liked to play with her very dark red hair.
She would always play with it for hours since she had no friends in the sky kingdom.
The reason for her loneliness was her dark, big wings that scared everyone off.
The only one that accepted her was the overlord of the underworld who desired her.
He was also a person with dark, black wings and he was lonely too.
He was amazingly popular and he was known as a great sadist and perverted old man.
But he has a really dark eyes that's enough to suck the heart of those who sees his eyes to the deepest pit of darkness one ever known, yet Ellen consider it as the most beautiful eyes she has ever seen in her own lifetime.
Ellen occasionally visit the overlord and make love towards him since the overlord forces her to do so.
Though she tried to resist, she eventually give up because she cant overcome the overlord's power that consumes both her body and her heart.
However, her visits to the lord's castle did not go unnoticed by the sky kingdom...
One day the other angels confronted her about this and she was banished from the kingdom and sent to earth
The lord heard about it and went to earth to find her..
When he found her her big black winds had been cut and she lay in blood on the ground.
He had looked at her once, and felt anguish that he had never felt before for anyone.
His anguish swiftly decayed into rage, and he swore that the angels would pay for their grand hypocrisy, their sham of purity.
Ellen who later woke up finding the lord beside her, was feeling relieved, but at the same time she can feel his hatred and anger, and she could not say a word even if she wants to.
The overlord not feeling Ellen's presents quikly vanished to plot his revenge on the angels, while Ellen feeling dizzy and confused from her loss of blood begain walking on the Earth and meet a young boy sitting in a tree near by.
The young boy regarded her with eyes of the deepest jade, seeing far more than they should have.
Ellen asked the boy where and who she was. . .it seems that Ellen losted her memories.
The boy didn't know how to respond to Ellen's strange questions. And even if he knew the answer, he could not enlighten her, for he was a mute.
The boy was very interested in Ellen and wanted to help so he started by giving her a name, that name was Scarlet after her beautiful dark red hair and her body that was soaked in blood.
Although he could not speak aloud, somehow, he was understood perfectly, whether because of Ellen's celestial heritage, or the boy's own mysterious past was unknown.
Mean while the Overloard sat in his chamber with such rage and cold heartedness to the angels that hell did begin to freeze, and any fool who was brave enough to enter his chambers was brutally killed.
Hatred and the need for vengence rolled from him in waves of ebony anger, making long-forgotten demons stir.
The demons were summoned to the Overlord, and he sent them to kill the leaders of the Sky Kingdom.
However, the angels were reluctant to die, and fought back, their crystal swords a beautiful sight in all its horror.
Overlord goes into more rage seeing that the angels never give up on fighting that he decided to kill them and the the leaders of sky kingdom himself.
For everyone knows, if you want a job done right, you do it yourself. And the fight did go so very right...
Alas! All the Angels died instantly simply with couple of blows, and all that's left for him is to face the archangels and the leader.
However, the Archangels were not so easily defeated, and the Overlord had to flee to tend to his grievous wounds, leaving one angel alive.
The boy with the deep jade eyes look at Scarlet and took her by the hand to where he lived.
Calling his home a shack was polite, but what it lacked in appearance, it made up for in its sense of home.
Scarlet heavenly wings and ears came out of her body and she showed her true form suddenly.
Power rolled from her in waves. The Overlord, so far away felt the electricity play across his skin, and he knew.
Then the overlord thought she had reincarnated the last archangel sesened it too and planned to kill her in revenge. While the boy, named Tim stared in amazement.
Tim (who found his name somewhat anti-climatic) reached forward to touch Ellen's hair, which gleamed and like fire.
However, she's actually in the middle of reviving herself but at the same time, releasing her true powers, causing all powerful lords, humans or non-humans, to shiver in fear, except for the overlord, and the boy (Tim) who's origin is still unknown.
When Scarlet was finished, the last arch-angel, Remmie decided to reproduce some new angels until the next battle with the overlord and to assassinate Scarlet.
Being the last archangel, it would have been difficult for Remmie to reproduce on his own, and so he descended into the world of the humans.
So he found Ellen and tried to get her to make his kids.
However Ellen, now known as Scarlet, did not share Remmie's sentiments, and the heroic Tim came to her rescue.
Of course Tim was badly defeated and Remmie kidnapped Ellen (Scarlet) and continuously raped her until she produced enough angel eggs for other angels.
Scarlet wept, her heart torn in two from the traumatic event. And as she wept, abandoned and sprawled on the forest floor, the Overlord found her. The Overlord was shocked and mad at the same time to see his beloved to be badly raped. . . he wanted her again but she forgotten him.
So the overlord decided to take her to the castle. Meanwhile Tim decided to be strongest human on earth to take back Scarlet once again.
But the only hardship that the Overlord had to face was not found in Tim. The archangels were amassing (for they became adults in a matter of weeks) and Remmie was plotting his revenge...
Another trouble he had was to make new memories with Scarlet since she had horrible memories with the archangel. Remmie desired Scarlet body more and more to make huge armies of angels.
But the Overlord was not willing to simply give into to Remmie, now that he had once again found his Scarlet. The forces of darkness started to gather to him...
Tim also wanted to wage war to have Scarlet so its was the great battle of the three worlds for a mere woman.
This mere woman, so gentle hearted, was loath to watch them fight over her, and waste life. There was no end to fighting if the human dies they get reincarnated, the angel dies then they can merely be created again by others and there are no end to evil spirits to be upgraded to demons.
Ellen, such a gentle soul, knew that this could not end while she walked the earth, and so she ran to a nearby cliff and jumped...
Thinking that suicide would end her life eternally, she was mistaken when she was saved by her own wings, thus causing more grief for herself to realise that she is truly an angel, not a mortal being like humans.
She decided to find a sadistic human being that can torture and kill her so she can just die.
She had hoped to find salvation in a human, Louis DeSange, but he found his own salvation when faced with an angel, and swore to himself to never harm again.
It turns out Ellen's power of forgiveness (that she unconsciously emitted) is greater than she thought, yet neither the Overlord, Remmie or Tim is willing to back down from the battle, so she sought for even more sadistic human who's willing to torture her to death.
However, the newly reformed Louis was unwilling to ever let his savior suffer, and so he followed her, not letting anyone touch her.
Ellen, who's now even more depressed, finds herself on an edge because no one can even come near her.
Louis, who say her grief, tried all in his power to rid Ellen of it.
While all the confusion, Louis felt a new sentiment toward Scarlet forming inside him.
This concept was strange to him, an ache somewhere between his ribs, that made him selfless for the first time.
He asks Ellen why does he feel pain, and Ellen knew then, that he felt love towards her, and decided to run away from him somehow, fearing that he too would change for worse like the other three men before him, causing more grief not only for her but all the people in the world.
It became increasingly ovious that this 8 year old girl well everyone forgot that she was 8. honestly how old r the men who like her? sorry but i had to say it i mean the first line in the story says shes 8 yet she keeps geting raped every one writing this story (including me so dont feel to bad) is now a petifial honestly its a great story but i felt the need to rant about this. oh and feel free to leave this out of the next post THANK YOU! and dont kill me

I agree with kiki.....
this story is kinda weird....
this thing should be marked mature lol

please also leave this post out of the game

http://sherbetlemonscan.blogspot.com/

65Story Time~ - Page 3 Empty Re: Story Time~ Thu Jul 03, 2008 11:04 am

KiKi_burgers

KiKi_burgers
Strawberry
Strawberry

well its a great story theres just to much rape and to many old men but its still very entertaining

66Story Time~ - Page 3 Empty Re: Story Time~ Thu Jul 03, 2008 5:38 pm

nutmegan

nutmegan
Sherbet Lemon
Sherbet Lemon

I know! I was interested until every other person decided that rape was the best way to go with this thing! I mean, throw us a bone of wholesome, people!

67Story Time~ - Page 3 Empty Re: Story Time~ Sat Jul 05, 2008 11:48 am

shinjou


Pineapple
Pineapple

ah.. guess when it comes to just adding one line at a time.. people start to just may be, not noticing the first line that says eight.. may be it would've been better to write '8' instead of the word itself. people dont really read that long after all.. (of course i'm one of 'em, since i kinda just follow along with the story, though i think the beginning of raping alrealy changes the course of every kinds of stories... :P)

68Story Time~ - Page 3 Empty Re: Story Time~ Sat Jul 05, 2008 3:27 pm

nutmegan

nutmegan
Sherbet Lemon
Sherbet Lemon

Oh yeah, I forgot this kid was eight. Doesn't she have kids AND suicidal thoughts already?

69Story Time~ - Page 3 Empty Re: Story Time~ Mon Jul 07, 2008 2:43 pm

KiKi_burgers

KiKi_burgers
Strawberry
Strawberry

yep now thats some wholesome faimly entertainment (she probably has AIDS too)

70Story Time~ - Page 3 Empty Re: Story Time~ Tue Jul 08, 2008 8:20 am

happyvampyre

happyvampyre
Sherbet Lemon
Sherbet Lemon

Oh, wow... Much has happened while I (was forced to) basked in Florida sunlight... I totally forgot that she was eight... I'm trying to find a way to redeem the story...

Ah ha!! I have found a loophole! I wrote in one of my posts that archangels age much faster than humans! So, by the time the whole rape scene happens, she could be, like, sixteen.

71Story Time~ - Page 3 Empty Re: Story Time~ Tue Jul 08, 2008 8:22 am

KiKi_burgers

KiKi_burgers
Strawberry
Strawberry

but what about the normal human boy named tim that randomly gains an army and she could be a normal angel and not an archangel

YAY!!! KATIES BACK FROM FLORIDA!!!!!!!

72Story Time~ - Page 3 Empty Re: Story Time~ Tue Jul 08, 2008 8:26 am

happyvampyre

happyvampyre
Sherbet Lemon
Sherbet Lemon

... Okay.... Your thoughts are very quick... Yes, I just returned from Florida 10 hours ago. I greet you.

Okay... back to the angel bit... The angel girl lived among the archangels, and her race was never specified, so she COULD be an archangel... And we never specified Tim's age. He could be a "boy" because of his innocence. Yay for symbolism.

73Story Time~ - Page 3 Empty Re: Story Time~ Tue Jul 08, 2008 8:31 am

KiKi_burgers

KiKi_burgers
Strawberry
Strawberry

but he wasnt just a boy we was a "young boy"

74Story Time~ - Page 3 Empty Re: Story Time~ Tue Jul 08, 2008 8:35 am

happyvampyre

happyvampyre
Sherbet Lemon
Sherbet Lemon

Once again, symbolism! He was a "young boy" because his eyes had not yet been opened to the truths of the world!

Either that, or he's just one screwed up little boy.

75Story Time~ - Page 3 Empty Re: Story Time~ Tue Jul 08, 2008 8:41 am

KiKi_burgers

KiKi_burgers
Strawberry
Strawberry

the second one would be correct cause i wrote that part

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